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good song

I really like the chord structure and melody...however, I do think that it would sound better sung in a different way...now, I agree, an emo whining voice wouldn't work too well (well it would, but it would be generic)...so I'm thinking retro...old school...like Beatles...sounds like a Lennon song...well, that's my opinion...but hey, I really like the song! I think it has great potential...you just have to put some effort into the vocals :) I vote 5

gh0stchild33 responds:

Thanks. This is a song I dug up on my iTunes, and it was recorded years ago. I think I'm gonna try out a slightly more bravado vocal line. Thanks for the feedback.

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...it's hard to come up with words for this...your voice...is amazing...but it takes a while for me to realize that it is amazing. The guitar is simple....yet it fits in perfectly...I'm in love with this song :)

LenardNotLenny responds:

Thanks, I think its simplicity adds to it. I'll be looking out for more of your stuff.

amazing

this song is amazing...I think that the only thing I had an issue with was the other voice that came in (think it was still you, just another track or something)...I think it would have sounded better sung in harmony, not just doubling the track...but it still sounded nice...the song is great, the lyrics are nice, your voice is stunningly accurate for this song...I'm adding you to my favorites :)

please do check out my song if you get a chance.

gh0stchild33 responds:

You can bet your ass I'll check your stuff out. I'm really glad that there's a community of songwriters on this site that can appreciate one another's songs. Thanks for the review.

good stuff

I really like the voice and the main chords...but that distorted synth in between verses is just...I dunno...kinda annoying after the first time. Definitely comes through better with it's solo though :D Check out my song and let me know what you think, please.

LenardNotLenny responds:

Definitely. Thanks a lot for the support man.

starts off nice

I like the beat that comes in...but it gets repetative...hmmm, it's a chill song, not exactly my type, but The beat is catchy (especially when you change it up)...sounds like background music for Zelda (exploring a dungeon), hahaha...nice :)

if you get a chance, please check out my stuff!

BMC-Audio responds:

hey, thx for the review man. yeah, i tried not to make this as repetitive as some of my other songs by switching the beat, like you said, and the instrument. i was going for a slightly different feeling for this one so sorry if you weren't liking it.
thx for the review... i'll be sure to send you a review too.

well it flows pretty well

some of the scratches in the middle delay a bit so that it's off beat...it took me out of the song, but the melody is solid...not techno...more like hip-hop/funk with an electro-funk beat...soothing melody though...a nice attempt! 4/5

Please check out some of my stuff, I could use a review or two :)

Stealth-Emergence responds:

Thanks for you review man!

I'll be right on over! Get ready for review!

Thanks! XD

Stealth

a happy chill song :)

I really like the mellow distortion synth in the back...and the main synth sounds so nastalgic..it's strange, but it works really well! I see what you mean about the looping not working...but if it did work, I could listen to it for hours! It would seriously loop THAT welL! hahaha, well, I think this is put together very well! The beginning flows together really well and the end was perfectly made for the loop :) I love it! 5/5

if you get a chance, please check out my stuff (Perticularly Fantasy Aux and it's remix...those are my newest)...I can't believe that your first song got no reviews and hardly any downloads! It's great!

DJ-Sashka responds:

I thought I killed it at the end. This had only 3 or so votes until yesterday, so I'm not surprised about the DL's and reviews. Thanks for the review :D

I like!

Very soothing, yet mysterious...the beat is basic, but it evolves itself and becomes really cool...for some reason, it reminds me of a Scarface (movie) song...of course, without the cheezy 80's synths, lol...it get's a little drawn out in the middle, but it makes a point to end properly just like it began...good stuff! 5/5

DJCityScape responds:

thanks, i've never seen scarface so unfortunately i don't really know what you mean. but i do know 80s crap, so i have just a little bit of an idea. it's good to hear that you like the ending, because i wasn't really sure about it.

chill beat, nice synth

I really like this! robotic synth that I can chill to... You definatly got a good sense of control in everything you do... your experience shows in this piece. I hope to attain this level someday! :D Please check out my stuff too! (I just got a new song, "Fantasy Aux") I give this song a 5/5. It is an excelent example of what I look for in the audio portal :)

XDragonslayerX responds:

Hehe, wow thank you too man! I'll be sure to check out your stuff right away. :)

nice!

definatly a cool little loop! It has a simple structure, cool fade outs and bangin beats to come back in...it loops perfectly as well! I love it! 5/5

please go check out some of my stuff, I could use a review :)

DSMagnum responds:

With a review like that, I'll definetely check out some of your work!

I recently got into making songs...just barely started around June 24, 2006... I'm Jimmy Hallows. I'm currently involved in a band called the Ivy League Dropouts...look out for us!

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